tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post5840602620930412231..comments2023-08-02T17:27:46.030+02:00Comments on Anna's Adornments: 'Ties That Bind' - 'The House Call' - Romantic Friday Writers Challenge No 28 - Friday 30th December 2011Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-15479328772512617992012-01-04T17:44:52.169+01:002012-01-04T17:44:52.169+01:00Hi Anna,
Thanks for your comments and clarificatio...Hi Anna,<br />Thanks for your comments and clarifications about your goals for fiction and non fiction. My only concern about strict adherence to facts is that it can sometimes be an inhibiting factor that you need to watch out for. You can preserve the facts but don't be afraid to mine those areas of thought, emotion that cannot be represented solely by fact. In other words, be a medium of sorts. You are a very thoughtful writer.Scheherazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906467791904395295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-83397399505595190912012-01-01T09:21:34.159+01:002012-01-01T09:21:34.159+01:00Hello Anna. Happy New Year!
This prosetry (Adura&#...Hello Anna. Happy New Year!<br />This prosetry (Adura's word) was very touching. Initially, I did think the girl wasn't going to make it, but am glad she survived & still alive today...I love happy endings!<br /><br />One never knows what possess another person to go above & beyond the call of duty. I think it's commendable that you want to find out even more about this doctor. It would really be magical if he too is still living.<br /><br />I'm very proud of how far you've come with your writing Anna. Keep it up!<br />Thank you too for always being gracious & kind with your comments. It's meant a lot to me.<br /> <br />I wish you & your family all the very best for this New Year. May it be filled with much happiness, laughter & of course an abundance of love (smile).<br /><br />See you soon!<br />AndyThe Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-84347496755874112582011-12-31T19:56:09.066+01:002011-12-31T19:56:09.066+01:00Loved the transitional imagery: one step from chil...Loved the transitional imagery: one step from childhood, one step away from life, one step back to infancy . .<br /><br />A beautiful tale of survival.<br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-89501990221427174042011-12-31T16:02:25.132+01:002011-12-31T16:02:25.132+01:00you never let your reader get off your tips....and...you never let your reader get off your tips....and what a twist....<br />and i loved the way you expressed her fever...the comparison of her body and outside temperature....:)<br /><br />lovely piece....:)<br /><br />lifeLifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09495749901352409074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-7725484040035267312011-12-31T03:40:02.590+01:002011-12-31T03:40:02.590+01:00Anna, you have an intriguing story. I don't th...Anna, you have an intriguing story. I don't think you need to worry about honing so close to the facts of the story. You will find truth in your imagination and it will set you and your poetry free.Scheherazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906467791904395295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-23860706150942325362011-12-30T23:48:09.018+01:002011-12-30T23:48:09.018+01:00I too love the format - it seemed to drop the imag...I too love the format - it seemed to drop the images into my mind - it was a bit like watching a film of the sickness developing, and then breaking, and the slow, heart-breaking recovery. I'm looking forward to reading the 'part 2' romance bit in the same format!<br /><br />Happy New Year<br />LAura xLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-43129309329838592532011-12-30T19:00:40.417+01:002011-12-30T19:00:40.417+01:00I love the prose poetry format. And I am happy to...I love the prose poetry format. And I am happy to see you writing such a heart warming story of this young girl. She survived, thanks for the doctor's help, but had to relearn everything. At least, she can start anew.<br /><br />Wishing you Happy New Year and more lovely writes for 2012 ~<br /><br />All the best~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7646599654892446019.post-86856187262866197422011-12-30T13:40:33.115+01:002011-12-30T13:40:33.115+01:00Oh Anna, dear Anna, you had me sniffing all the wa...Oh Anna, dear Anna, you had me sniffing all the way through. What a sad story. I was expecting a sad ending, but you thrilled me with the news that she survived. I love your phrases: <br /><br />She had just taken one step away from childhood,<br />An now one step away from life.<br /><br />Isn't it annoying when we don't take the opportunities to find out more about things that happen, but the seed has been planted in our minds. <br /><br />I was so looking forward to reading your prosetry. Did you notice I had a little poem in my ghost story? That was fun to do.<br /><br />As always, Anna, thank you for being such a loyal writer for RomanticFridayWriters. I love what you contribute.<br /><br />I hope your Christmas was magical and that your New Year is filled with joy and health for you and your precious family.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.com